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| spiney |
Posted: November 02, 2009 09:34 am
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learner tattooist Group: Approved Member Posts: 74 Member No.: 165 Joined: September 16, 2009 |
![]() ![]() Unfinished still needs more color but the bloke couldn't handle the pain... |
| Sparx |
Posted: November 02, 2009 03:55 pm
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Administrator Group: Admin Posts: 1478 Member No.: 1 Joined: April 23, 2008 |
looking good mate, i see ya still going for big pieces
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| izarras_ink |
Posted: November 02, 2009 06:03 pm
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GLOBAL MODERATOR Group: Pro Artist *mod* Posts: 352 Member No.: 42 Joined: December 07, 2008 |
hi ya phil, more definition is needed, some of those stipes i wouldve made solid and put in some shading, you need to start looking at some reference pics, maybe when you know you're going to be doing a certain tattoo have a good look, say like this one have a look at what a tiger looks like, how the colour blends how the stripes go. Have a look at this one below i did, i know you're learning, this was the first tiger i tattooed, may give you some pointers for next time as they seem quite popular
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| Injun |
Posted: November 02, 2009 10:35 pm
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Member Group: Approved Member Posts: 72 Member No.: 156 Joined: September 01, 2009 |
I agree, darker, wider stripes, and add some greywash to add some depth to the image. But this is much better than the last piece of yours that I have seen.
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| beatlejohn |
Posted: November 02, 2009 10:47 pm
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Loyal Member Group: Approved Member Posts: 122 Member No.: 164 Joined: September 14, 2009 |
as usual i cant comment on anything techincal
This post has been edited by beatlejohn on November 02, 2009 10:49 pm |
| Tattered_Soul |
Posted: November 02, 2009 11:05 pm
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complimentry upgrade Group: Approved Member Posts: 51 Member No.: 178 Joined: October 17, 2009 |
so far it's looking decent. along with the stripe change and a bit more shading, I would do some power lining (outter outline more bold). But that's just me.
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| spiney |
Posted: November 03, 2009 09:04 am
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learner tattooist Group: Approved Member Posts: 74 Member No.: 165 Joined: September 16, 2009 |
Thanks, I know But I can't help it |
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| spiney |
Posted: November 03, 2009 09:14 am
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learner tattooist Group: Approved Member Posts: 74 Member No.: 165 Joined: September 16, 2009 |
Looking at the piece now your right as always the stripes do need to be more bolder and it lacks a lot of detail but I should be-able to fix this when he comes back to get it finished. Your tiger is great and very helpful for getting a good idea on how the stripes should look. Thanks for been so helpful to me.. |
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| spiney |
Posted: November 03, 2009 09:21 am
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learner tattooist Group: Approved Member Posts: 74 Member No.: 165 Joined: September 16, 2009 |
Thank you every one for all the great advice, all that is told to me is put into practice with every piece I do. you are all helping me so much
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| beatlejohn |
Posted: November 03, 2009 09:24 am
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Loyal Member Group: Approved Member Posts: 122 Member No.: 164 Joined: September 14, 2009 |
must be all my technical advice rite mate
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| stacks |
Posted: November 04, 2009 06:42 pm
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Member Group: Pro Artist Posts: 55 Member No.: 172 Joined: September 30, 2009 |
i think maybe a heavier outline, more shading with blacks and maybe some brown and darker . thicker stripes
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| Damien666 |
Posted: November 05, 2009 09:22 pm
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Member ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 39 Member No.: 176 Joined: October 06, 2009 |
i like the piece but agree with everyone too,still very nice work
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